tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2266165388241503927.post3324804220289220455..comments2007-10-03T22:05:49.383-07:00Alihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03879718922310280062noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2266165388241503927.post-34658321286492598612007-10-03T22:05:00.000-07:002007-10-03T22:05:00.000-07:00Comments and Feedback<BR/><BR/>Theory<BR/><BR/>More attention should have been devoted to outlining and discussing the implications arising from the study findings, rather than just describing the studies in detail. It might have been useful to outline a theoretical rationale for the order in which you ranked the studies, as this was not clear in your discussion. You also needed to spend more time linking relevant social psychology theory to the studies and the findings obtained.<BR/><BR/>Research<BR/><BR/>The research studies appear to have been described in too much detail and could have been described more succinctly.<BR/><BR/>Written Expression<BR/><BR/>Written expression was generally clear and easy to follow; however, some grammatical errors were present. In-text references and references in the reference list were not correctly presented, according to APA (5th ed.) format. In the introduction, you needed to outline a clearer plan for your blog discussion; what angle and perspective were you going to adopt when discussing the studies?<BR/><BR/>On-line Engagement<BR/><BR/>Some on-line engagement was present, based on the useful links and internet sites in your blog discussion. The You-Tube Link containing the Stanford Prison Experiment was very interesting. You might find the film, 'The Experiment' interesting (and hopefully worth watching!). It is a German film (with subtitles) and is based on the Stanford Prison Experiment; it has been aired on SBS a couple of times over the last year.Alexhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11706159228916029898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2266165388241503927.post-32627927376713952402007-09-02T10:43:00.000-07:002007-09-02T10:43:00.000-07:00That prison experiment is really fascinating. Did you find anything particularly interesting in your research?Markhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18284733508369126757noreply@blogger.com